Three text blocks, before and after. Every "after" is built from something one of our clients said out loud on a call — and every one is a single flip across the same line.
where your copy is aimed
Help them find more people
where they actually are
They already have the people. They're not asking.
We pulled every pain point our clients named on 2026 calls — 66 of them. Six different people described sitting on people they already have and never making the ask. Not one asked who they should be connecting with. That gap is the only thing being fixed below.
Block 1 · the banner line
before
"Selling your services super + natural and personalized to you"Sales from the Heart waitlist
after
The person you've been meaning to message all week is your next client.I help coaches and service-based business owners get clients without being weird.Find out how you're designed to sell
The flip: you were the subject of the sentence — now they are. It described a service; it now names something sitting in their phone right now.
said by a client"They're not replying because it was such a distance of time." — 600 comments she never followed up on.
proven structure"[The thing you need] already happened — you're just not doing the one act." Same skeleton as a video in our market at 50,000 views.
Block 2 · the first four lines of your about section
before
Getting clients shouldn't feel this weird. 😉
You can have a great offer, post consistently, and STILL wonder…
Who should I be connecting with?
And how do I turn those conversations into clients without sounding salesy?
after
Getting clients shouldn't feel this weird. 😉
You have a good offer. You post. You show up.
And the message you've been meaning to send is still sitting there, three weeks later.
It's not a lead problem. You already know who. 💜
That's the work I do with coaches and service-based business owners building $10K+ months.
Around here, we call it Supernatural Sales™
The flip: it asked her to wonder who — now it tells her she already knows who. A question she isn't asking became a fact she can't argue with.
said by a client"I know that I have to do the, the outreaches. I have not been." · "I haven't gotten any conversations." · "In my mind, I'm telling myself I don't."
proven structureName several wrong diagnoses she's currently holding, then withhold the real one. A competitor is running exactly this shape in paid ads right now.
Block 3 · the CTA at the end of your about section
before
Do you know your Supernatural Ability yet? 😃
Discover how YOU are uniquely designed to connect, serve & sell.
It's waiting for you above 👆
Then let me know what gets revealed just for YOU!!Ends in an insight. Nothing has to happen next.
after
Do you know your Supernatural Ability yet? 😃
Two minutes — how you are designed to connect, serve & sell. Even if you've never once felt like a salesperson.
It's waiting for you above 👆
Then go send the one message you've been sitting on — and come back and tell me what happened. 💜Ends in an act. The act is the thing you sell.
The flip: discover yourself → discover, then send. The old one closed a loop in her head; this one closes it in her sent folder.
said by a client"I have no idea how many contacts I have made… honestly I haven't kept track." — her best conference ever, and no ask logged.
proven structure"Even if [the objection]" — the single most durable line in our market: one ad using it has run continuously for 19 months.
Also on the banner
before
Start the quizNobody wants to take a quiz.
after
Find out how you're designed to sellThey want the result, not the format.
The flip: the thing they have to do → the thing they get.